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Persistence is a Virtue

Story Name: Persistence is a Virtue
Character Number(s): Four Hundred and Thirteen
Rating: PG
Summary:This is the introduction to Jason Rourke and his story. His high school sweetheart Angela and their daughter, whom he never knew existed until the beginning of the story, have just shown up out of nowhere. Angela never told him about their daughter because she was afraid of messing up his career. Needless to say they have a lot of issues, especially since she turned up on Jason's doorstep only because she's gotten into some serious trouble and their daughter's life has been threatened.
Disclaimer: I plan on this becoming a suspense/thriller novel one day, but for now I'd just like feedback on this scene.
Author's Notes: This is the introductory scene for an original story inspired by my entry for character number 413 from Character a Day.

Persistence is a Virtue

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Welcome!!
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Thank you!
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I'm happy to be here.
And I'm very happy you're here! :D
Thanks. I'm looking forward to exercising my muse in this group.
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It may take me a while to get used to things because I'm new to LiveJournal, but once I learn my way around I think I'll have a wonderful time here. =]
No worries - if you need any help, averypartofme, midnight_burn and I are happy to assist!
Thanks! I'll definitely keep that in mind. I love doing the character a day thing. It's awesome.
feel free to spam the suggestion box with ideas, if you have them :D
I will, gladly! I think this is a brilliant community.
Why thanks! All the credit goes to emmyangua. She came up with it. Well, I'm going to stop harassing you :D
It's totally fine. Harass me all you want. I'll be online for a while. What did you think of my ideas for 413? Am I doing this right? Anything I need to change?
Well... in THAT case...

*goes to see*
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Thank youuuuuuuuu!